I succumb to the walls,
Retiring all my beliefs.
My fears standing tall,
Dance upon my relief.
The ceiling is tainted,
As shadows pirouette.
Their tunes are painted,
Along hues of contempt.
This conjunction joining,
Two different parts of me.
Is a neat & willful catering,
To a darker side you never see.
-Nameera.
WOW! 👏🏽
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took out for reading this. (:
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome dear! You’re so talented 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re an amazing writer yourself! 😊 💞 I’m glad I stumbled upon your blog.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! I’m grateful to have found yours 😊 cheers to many more words 🥂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Indeed. ✨
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow. Wow to your meaningful poetry, and wow to your incredible art.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m truly humbled by your feedback 😊 Thank you so very much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is poignant in another dimension. You truly are a weaver of words. MashaAllah.
And see the coincidence I have written a poem, a very old poem with the same tittle, the dark side. Would you mind if I link it up here?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much! Words are my only wealth, only silk to let me embroider patterns that cross my mind 🙂 Sure, I’d love to check it out!!
LikeLike
https://wp.me/p7MN1c-md.
Here you go, (not as good as yours though.) 😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m sure it’s good in its own way! 🙂
LikeLike
This, this is expressed so well! Bravo 🌻 ❤ your artwork
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so so much! Your lovely feedback totally makes my day 💞😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the symbolism of the face within the face, the other side. The inner you. I loved the way each line flowed and complimented the next, very strong.🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you much!
What I love most about your feedback is the attention you pay behind the meaning of Words.
I really appreciate it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much for your compliments, I appreciate that. I like the emotion you put into your writing, it makes it enjoyable to read.
LikeLike
Loved the two faces of this poem, the symbolism of the inner you from dawn to dusk. I love how each line compliments each other relating to the darker color fading. You wrote this very well and made it somewhat mysterious. Wonderful.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Deep and direct !! I enjoyed reading it Nameera ❤️😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you did! 💫 Thank you so much.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome Nameera 😇❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so, very much!
Your feedback is always so introspective & meaningful.
I’m very sorry for the late response, your comment somehow ended up as spam!
LikeLike