Every night when the city sleeps
I hear the whistling train
Roaming upon precise tracks
Carrying dozed out travellers
While my sleep revels
At each and every attempt
Verses form in unexplored
Parts of my mind
As I try to pause them till
Daylight
But the harder I try
The faster they fade
Just like that
Thoughts become my sleeping pills
While the night numbs my limbs
Like an echo that’s lost
My words drown in the
Subconscious
Till all meaning is gone
And sleep goes on and on and on.
-Nameera.
Thoughts become my sleeping pill, such amazing line! Brilliant!
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Thanks a lot Tanya, I’m glad you liked it! ☺
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I absolutely did 🌹
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Amazing 💯♥️
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Thank you so much!
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“Verses form in unexplored
Parts of my mind
As I try to pause them till
Daylight
But the harder I try
The faster they fade”. I guess this happens with me too sometimes.
JazakAllah khair sister. Very well penned. 👍👍.
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I think it happens with nearly all writers and poets 😀 Thank you so much!!
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Sometimes it get annoying. 😁.
Hope you are MashaAllah keeping well. Keep praying . 👍👍.Fi Aman Allah.
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Sounds like you sleep pretty good! ❤
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Yes, I sleep pretty good at 3 AM. 😂 Thanks for the read!❤
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3am you say ? . . . . (i’ll just jot that down) 🙂
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Yep. :]
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Wow.
What an absolutely riveting beautifully written poem. ❤
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Thanks a ton, I’m so glad to hear that! (:
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Such a beautiful portrayal of emotions
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Thank you so much!!
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My absolute pleasure
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Your poetry of late has matured, it seems; aged like good red wine. I think I’ll have a second glass!
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Wow. This is the best thing I’ve read today!! Thank you, from the bottom of my heart for enjoying my poetry like you always do. I feel like I’m on cloud nine right now !! This means a lot to me. ❤
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Beautiful ❣
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Really glad to hear that, Thanks a ton!
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Where do I get those thoughts which become the sleeping pills? It’s the exact opposite with my thoughts. They keep me up all night.
And again, beautifully penned. 🙂
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Mine keep me up until I fall asleep 😌 I believe different things work for different people 😀
Thank you so much (:
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Beautiful. I can relate. Same happens to me.
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Thank you very much! I’m glad you could relate (:
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