“You shouldn’t chase bad habits, they’ve a way of leaving you deranged in the middle of nowhere” He let out a puff of grey smoke that danced its way only to immerse in thin air. Though its presence was invisible but I’m sure it has & will always corrupt fresh air.
“I am deranged. And I am stuck in the middle of nowhere. One more bad habit can’t possibly worsen things that are already hopeless for me” I proclaimed, feeling very much like a philosopher. He smiked at me, his dark eyes watching me curiously, “Are you sure?”. My heart skipped a beat. I’ve never been certain of my own existence. How am I supposed to know what surity feels like? I pursed my lips and gazed listlessly at the stars that shone like lanterns, lighting the dark canopy of the night sky. “I am” I heard myself say aloud to, not only his surprise but mine as well. He raised his brows impressively though I’m sure it was his way of mocking me. “Only time will tell” he chimed pleasantly. He was right, only time can tell whether these stars, the moon & the smoke escaping the end of our Cigerate is ever going to coincide, whether he’s going to be another bad habit I’ll need to bury in the back of my head where he’ll always remain trapped.
Like Cigerates under the stars
I can see him burning my scars
Only to light my way ahead
And drag me back from a slumber.
He gives me hope, feeble it may be
But it’s still something
A tiny fragment of desire,
Of affection & life
Is what I see when
I look at him
He’s here now
With me in the dark
As we smoke our Cigerates
Under curiously watchful Stars.
-Nameera.
Intriguing read. 👍. Quite a thriller. 😁.
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Thank you, glad you think so. 😊
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We all need that little bit of hope. Great story, Nameera: very well-written!
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Indeed. Hope keeps us afloat. Thanks a lot Josh!
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I love this, Neemra. You are a great story teller
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Thank youuuu. ❤
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My pleasure
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bookmarked this ♥ so beautiful ahhhahhh.sigh
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Wow. I’m truly humbled, Thank you so much! 🙌❤
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That is something very intimate as well as intriguing.. 😊
I love how you played with words to serve your purpose..
Great work, Nameera 😊
Warm Regards,
Dee Kay
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I’m so happy to hear that, thanks a lot Dee Kay! 😊❤
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Most welcome 😊
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THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD!!!!!
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THANK YOU SOUL SIS. ❤❤❤
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Most welcome ❤❤
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Wow.. Great story!!
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Thanks a ton. (:❤
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Wow. I’m truly humbled! Thank you sm🙌❤
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Brilliant. Though it appears to be simple on the surface level but the depth is remarkable
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Thank you, I’m so glad you liked it. (:
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That title!! Jeez in love with this one
❤️
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Thank you!!❤
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Awesome story
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Thank you so much!
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