In its internment,
My heart was on
Its knees, ever-
Ready to serve
The master’s
Command.
Be it burying myself under
A mountain of responsibility
Or diving in an ocean that
Was never enough to
Satiate your thirst for
Perfection,
I had my mind set
On fulfilling your
Wishes before
They had to
Travel up your
Throat & find a
Way to the tip
Of your acidic
Tongue.
Alas, I was no angel,
I had served my
Term long
Enough.
It was time now,
For me to kill your heart.
Labeled a thief, a murderer
For my crime,
They never saw the knives
Groped in my scars that
I exposed to you with
The only faith I had
In store.
You stole my faith,
I smashed your heart;
That makes us even
But they only see
Pieces of your heart,
What of the mistrust
That will forever
Reside in my mind,
Extracting my soul
Of the last thing
That keeps me
Alive โ hope.
-Nameera.
A broken heart is almost always subject to metaphors & wordplay. As beautiful as it is to read words written for broken hearts, I’d like to draw your attention to emotions that also matter. Trust & hope go hand in hand, they’ve interchangeable consequences. We’re mere human beings, we break hearts & get ours broken by others. The least we can do is cherish trust. Hope isn’t everlasting, I don’t say so because I’m pessimistic but because it’s reality.
Trust is a treasure trove, every time you add little trinkets of hope, it grows.
This is splendid, Nameera!
“Trust & hope go hand in hand, theyโve interchangeable consequences. ”
I love how you ended with that. Much to think about ๐
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I’m extremely satisfied to leave you with something to ponder about. Thank you so much for your precious time & lovely feedback, Soundarya!
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My pleasure, Nameera ๐
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Your writings are poignant
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Thank you soooo much! ๐
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This is amazing. You have such talent.
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Thank you so much, I’m really glad to hear that. ๐ธ
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Really beautifully written Nameera – I loved this post :O)
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I’m glad you did! ๐โจ
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Beautifully written Nameera
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Thank you so much. ๐ธ
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You are welcome Nameera
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This is so nicely written ๐
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Thanks a bunch!!
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You’re very welcome ๐๐ธ
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so, very much!!
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I love the poetry and the commentary at the end. What piece of work. โค๏ธ
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I’m glad to hear that, Thanks a ton!!
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My pleasure ๐ธ๐
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