The grey eyes were like a puff of cloud ready for heavy downpour but concern held it back. Her bony fingers would interlock in disquietude then she would fidget back & forth in anticipation, waiting for her mother to recover.
Little did the ten year old know that death is irrevocable.
‘Time will heal everything’ exclaimed a vast concourse of mourners but in their hearts they know that some wounds stay fresh forever. Her memory lingers like a pall of dust & smoke encircling our present, aphyxiating us for the trillionth time as we yearn for mother’s love.
I’ve written this for a challenge posted on Finally Unchained. Do check it out if you’re interested!
, this is a poignant read, must say that you have penned it metaculosly.
(I am really thankful to the Almighty/the Creator for my beloved parents .)
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Thank you so, very much!
So am I, Alhamdulillah.
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The bond between a child and his/her parents is so sacred and emotionally attached that, sometimes it becomes very hard for one to accept they are no more there.
So nicely written.🤗
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I know. It’s hard to accept their absence. Some people never truly move on.
Thank you! 😊
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Yes so true.
You are welcome.🤗
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A vacuum that can never be filled…..poignant
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Indeed. A wound that stays afresh. Thanks for reading!
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It was a pleasure
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Beautiful portrayed. Some wounds never heal
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Thanks a lot!
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My pleasure
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Keep writing like this girl, you need more recognition 🙂
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Thank you so, very much! 😊
I’m really overwhelmed by your lovely comment. 🌸
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❤️❤️
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So Sad! 😦 lovely writing.
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Indeed.
Thanks for reading!
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