In My Mind

Compliments -I’ve always loathed them,
I mean, can’t we just keep quiet?

Even Pablo Neruda would agree,
After all ‘Keeping Quiet’ was his dream.
Or was it just wordplay to soothe the senses and brighten perspectives?

It’s funny how I sugarcoat depression,
Making it taste like candy just so I can forget what self-hate does
To my tongue.

(Candy is sweet)

I’ve a strange resonance with Edgar Allan Poe,
Mind you, I don’t need melancholy to have a gothic soul.
But his words were the first,
To spark within me the love for all things dark and sad.

‘A dream within a dream’ how else would you define life?

While other girls look for ‘Fault in Our Stars’,
I’m content to watch spaceships dart right across the universe into a Black hole,
Where a concourse of time and space is relishing to the eyes,
On how devoted I am to the glories Of an idiot box.

I like to announce my carelessness,
Pronouncing each mistake with immense satisfaction.
I’m not a peach, I’m a nut,
Impossible to crack.
Impossible to chew.

(Alas! the irony makes me sigh)

Hurt me once, oh please do,
I’ll be kind, I promise you.

Hurt me thrice,
Picture me cutting you into pieces,
Unfathomable to the mind.

(I used to cut plastic dolls, you know)


I’ve gone way overboard with free-verse poetry, don’t you think?

As some of you might already know, I mostly resort to writing poems with a certain rhyme scheme.

Well, for a little change I decided to go for free-verse poetry.

This is an epitome of letting my thoughts flow. I literally wrote the first thing that came to my mind lol.



  1. Jaya Singh says:

    It is really nice, Nam. You allowed your mind to flow freely and it did it superbly. Your first line remind me a line, I would like to share. It was “the worst thing about people is not the insults but the compliments”.

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    1. Nameera says:

      Wow. This is so true!! Thanks so much for sharing the quote šŸŒø
      And Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. šŸ˜Š

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      1. Jaya Singh says:

        My pleasure šŸ™ƒ šŸ’•

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  2. Sunny says:

    This is nice….šŸ‘

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    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you so much!!


      1. Sunny says:


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  3. This is such a great read. Thanks for sharing

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    1. Nameera says:

      Thanks for reading! šŸ˜Š

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      1. My pleasure always

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  4. Artwork!!šŸ˜šŸ˜

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    1. Nameera says:

      Thank youuu!

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  5. You do good justice to free-verse poetry, even though you say this was the first thing that came into your mind, i can see that this poem is the product of several ideas and emotions that have slowly marinated into your subconscious over time because your poetry has coherence and structure. Look forward to reading more from you! šŸ™‚

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    1. Nameera says:

      I’m truly humbled! Thank you so, very much for being a keen observer, after all nothing can elate a poet more than genuine & honest feedback. šŸŒø

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      1. My Pleasure šŸ™‚

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