I hear you’ve been saying,
That I’m never there for you.
I’m sorry for not staying,
Others were waiting too.
I hear you’ve been putting blame,
On me whenever you mess up.
But know that I’m in a race,
Against hours, seconds & minutes.
I see you undermining me,
And I give you chances incessantly.
But you never seem to believe,
That I won’t wait, I’ll leave.
I know you still don’t get it,
But soon enough you’ll realise.
When your days become unfit,
You’ll call me by my name- Time.
-Nameera.
Wow! Felt like the clock talking to face to face! Very well written dear! 👌😊
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Thank you so very much, I really appreciate your feedback, love (:
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Wowww well penned ❤️
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Thanks a ton!
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Welcome 😊
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This thing is out for revenge!😂
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Indeed. 😂
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Lovely poem 🙂 Didn’t see the ending coming!
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Thank you! That’s why I didn’t give it a title 😉
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Got updated with your post. Amazing,, this one too is superb heartfelt.
You really have a way to it. Keep writing looking forward to your posts. God bless you.
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Thank you so very much for your time & feedback, I really appreciate it!! In Sha Allah I’ll keep writing 🙂 Also Eid Mubarak!! ✨(It’s Eid here today)
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You have a blessed day. I published a poem yesterday Nameera, please do have a look in your leisure, hope you will like it. JazakAllah khair.
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Very well written Nameera! 😊
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Thank you, beautiful!💞
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Wonderful poem 😊
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I’m glad you think so, thanks!
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Welcome buddy ❤️😊
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Lovely!
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Thank you so much!!
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Let me tell you one thing– your blog is so far the best I’ve come across (with no offence to anyone else). I read your poems and they take me to another world. I realise how different your perspective is, as I’ve seen your posts portray your mind perfectly. They’re so powerful and uplifting that I’m a fan of you! I read your posts about India-pakistan and being an Indian-muslim and I agree to every single thing you say: it’s like you’re speaking my mind without even knowing!
God bless you. Keep up the work as I’ll need more to read.
Love, Anchal. 💖💕💖💕
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Words can’t express the gratitude I feel at this moment. I don’t think there’s anything else that could make me truly happy other than an amazing person like you appreciating my work. It’s overwhelming to know that we share similar mindsets! I just try to express my opinions as best as I can on issues that deserve attention. Thank you so so much for your time & lovely feedback, Anchal! 💞 🙂
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No problem. 💘
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