,,

I hear you’ve been saying,
That I’m never there for you.
I’m sorry for not staying,
Others were waiting too.

I hear you’ve been putting blame,
On me whenever you mess up.
But know that I’m in a race,
Against hours, seconds & minutes.

I see you undermining me,
And I give you chances incessantly.
But you never seem to believe,
That I won’t wait, I’ll leave.

I know you still don’t get it,
But soon enough you’ll realise.
When your days become unfit,
You’ll call me by my name- Time.

-Nameera.

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22 Comments

  1. Himanshi says:

    Wow! Felt like the clock talking to face to face! Very well written dear! 👌😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you so very much, I really appreciate your feedback, love (:

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  2. Rêveuse says:

    Wowww well penned ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Thanks a ton!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Rêveuse says:

        Welcome 😊

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  3. This thing is out for revenge!😂

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Indeed. 😂

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  4. Tokens Of Expression says:

    Lovely poem 🙂 Didn’t see the ending coming!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you! That’s why I didn’t give it a title 😉

      Like

  5. AQUIB says:

    Got updated with your post. Amazing,, this one too is superb heartfelt.
    You really have a way to it. Keep writing looking forward to your posts. God bless you.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you so very much for your time & feedback, I really appreciate it!! In Sha Allah I’ll keep writing 🙂 Also Eid Mubarak!! ✨(It’s Eid here today)

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      1. AQUIB says:

        You have a blessed day. I published a poem yesterday Nameera, please do have a look in your leisure, hope you will like it. JazakAllah khair.

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  6. Kranti says:

    Very well written Nameera! 😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you, beautiful!💞

      Like

  7. Wonderful poem 😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nameera says:

      I’m glad you think so, thanks!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Welcome buddy ❤️😊

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    1. Nameera says:

      Thank you so much!!

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Anchal Sethi says:

    Let me tell you one thing– your blog is so far the best I’ve come across (with no offence to anyone else). I read your poems and they take me to another world. I realise how different your perspective is, as I’ve seen your posts portray your mind perfectly. They’re so powerful and uplifting that I’m a fan of you! I read your posts about India-pakistan and being an Indian-muslim and I agree to every single thing you say: it’s like you’re speaking my mind without even knowing!
    God bless you. Keep up the work as I’ll need more to read.
    Love, Anchal. 💖💕💖💕

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    1. Nameera says:

      Words can’t express the gratitude I feel at this moment. I don’t think there’s anything else that could make me truly happy other than an amazing person like you appreciating my work. It’s overwhelming to know that we share similar mindsets! I just try to express my opinions as best as I can on issues that deserve attention. Thank you so so much for your time & lovely feedback, Anchal! 💞 🙂

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      1. Anchal Sethi says:

        No problem. 💘

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